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“Trust me Alfred, humans are nothing but toys and food to us. They’re not worth caring about” Arthur held his brother close to him. Alfred was a young vampire, he knew of humans but questioned why he had to stay away from them.


“But I wanted to play with those guys” Alfred frowned and pointed outside to a group of children playing.


“But look” Arthur tilted his head to look at a group of boys surrounding a crying boy.


“they will see that you are different from them and they will hate you. They will shun you and make you an outcast” Arthur murmured into his ear.




~Le Timeskip and nobody’s POV~



Alfred ignored Arthur’s words he had told him so often as a child. He never let that stop him from finding (y/n). she was Alfred’s everything to him. He felt almost ashamed that she had yet to learn that he was actually a vampire. Alfred saw himself as a ‘heroic’ vampire since he only drank the blood of criminals. Alfred was afraid of (y/n) would view him as a monster and leave him to be with someone else, another human.


Alfred tried so hard to blend into human society. He had a large, beautiful home, a well paying job and his lovely (y/n). Nobody ever suspected him of anything. His vampire abilities surpassed others of his kind so he never had to worry. Crosses didn’t bother him and he could eat garlic. He could be in sunlight for long hours with only a severe sunburn worse than normal ones if he didn’t wear protective clothes. He could eat and sleep like a regular human. He only drank blood twice a month if needed. His one and only flaw was that he could die by being submerged in holy water, which was very unlikely to happen. Alfred was the new modern vampire unlike many others.



~Your POV~


You woke up in the middle of the night feeling cold. You turned to see Alfred out of bed. He was sitting on the balcony. You got up quietly and walked over to him while his back was turned to you. You smiled and wrapped your arms around his neck and hugged him.


“(y/n), it’s late. You should go back to bed” Alfred murmured


“Not without you” you muttered barely above and whisper. Alfred chuckled and stood up and followed you back into the bedroom. You crawled onto the bed and wormed your way under the soft and plush sheets as Alfred joined you.


Alfred pulled you close and kissed your forehead as you fell back into sleep. You were Alfred’s greatest happiness.


A loud crash alerted Alfred to an intruder. (y/n) was deep asleep so no noise bothered her. Alfred quietly slipped out of bed once more and bundled the blankets close to (y/n) so the absence of his heat did not awaken her.



~Alfred’s POV~


I carefully walked downstairs to see a face I was hoping never to see again. Arthur’s.


“Ah, hello old chap. It’s been a long time since I saw my baby brother, how’s pretending to be human working out for you?” Arthur grinned as he sat comfortably on my sofa like he owned the place.


“what the hell are you doing here and what do you want?” I hissed at him.


“I came to eat” Arthur smirked as one of his fangs protruded from his upper lip.


“Stay away from my (y/n) I growled and flashed my fangs at him.


“So that’s the name of the delicacy I smell” Arthur licked his lips and stood up.


“Get out….” I growled deeper and hissed with my fangs aimed at him. He attempted to dash around me until I grabbed his arm and threw him back.


~Your POV~


You awoke to crashing and yelling downstairs. You quickly rushed down to see Alfred fighting against another blonde male. Both of them were trying to strangle the other and were those vampire fangs?!


Sure enough, Alfred had long, sharp-looking canines menacingly pointed at the male above him pinning him down.


“(y/n), run, hide!!” Alfred yelled and you were frozen. Your legs felt as heavy as lead and that they were full of jelly. You wanted to move but your body wouldn’t cooperate.


Alfred continued to punch, hiss at and tackle the other male and fight him off. You felt so useless watching the fight, feeling as though there was nothing you could do. You looked to your side and saw the sun beginning to rise from the other side of the curtains.



“Alfred watch out!” You yelled and yanked the curtains open. Sunlight entered the room and Arthur screeched as it hit his skin. Arthur writhed and squirmed as his skin blistered and began disintegrating into ashes. You looked at Alfred who stared down at the pile of ashes.


“Alfred, how are you still alive?” you asked as he stood in the light.


“Arthur’s an older vampire so he can’t be in sunlight. I’m a younger one so I’ve adapted to sunlight quite well. I’m the hero, I can’t die!” he laughed and hugged you tightly.


“I’m just glad he didn’t hurt you” Alfred murmured and hugged you closer to him.


“(y/n)?” Alfred whispered and looked down at you


“Yeah?” you stared back up into his swimming ocean blue eyes.


“You don’t think I’m a monster now that you know I’m a vampire?” he asked

You gently leaned up and kissed him passionately. He smiled and returned the kiss by wrapping his arms around your waist.


“I love you Alfred, I don’t care that you’re a vampire. It just makes you cooler” you smiled and pulled him down for another kiss.


~Extended Ending~


“Hey Alfred, guess what?”


“What?”


“we’re a better love story than Twilight”
I had to write that ending.......I couldn't resist. I apologize if it's not to anyone's liking. I appreciate comments greatly!!!!~
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karmasluck Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Student General Artist
FRICKIN LOVE THE ENDING
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hetalialover72 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
TWILIGHT IS NOTHING COMPARED TO ALFIE AND ME!!!!!! 
Alfred: YEAH!
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8luvanime8 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
OMG ITS SO TRUE!!!!HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
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megaanimeluver7803 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
That last sentence made me laugh so hard I woke up my entire family! XD
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RubyBadAppleDream Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student Artist
BETTER LOVE STORY THAN TWILIGHT OMG SO TRUE XD 
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TheOneOfYOursTruly Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Writer
Lol that ending XD
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Blue-Demon-Hybrid Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
That ending's too cute!
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yolokitty246 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
awwwww why can't I have as many fangirls as him??? I'm much more charming.....Tantrum - Emote Tantrum - Emote Tantrum - Emote Tantrum - Emote Tantrum - Emote Tantrum - Emote Tantrum - Emote Tantrum - Emote Tantrum - Emote Kaoani--Pout pout Kaoani--Pout pout Kaoani--Pout pout Kaoani--Pout pout Pout Emoticon Pout Emoticon Pout Emoticon Pout Emoticon Pout Emoticon Pout Emoticon Pout Emoticon Pout Emoticon Very Sad Emote Very Sad Emote Very Sad Emote Very Sad Emote Very Sad Emote Very Sad Emote Very Sad Emote Very Sad Emote Pirate says PLEASE Pirate says PLEASE Pirate says PLEASE Pirate says PLEASE Pirate says PLEASE Pirate says PLEASE 
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MosdrasTheLight Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Heck yes we are a Better love story!
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kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
yes. this has so much win in it that my "Win-o-meter" broke. very, very awesome
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Xyla-tomatoes-14 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Brace yourself, the Twilight comments are coming!
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Ilovesanime342 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
*Cue slow clapping* Love the Extended Ending.
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canadatheninja Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That ending was wonderful! Reader-chan and Alfred are a better love story than twilight heck Germany and Herr Stick would be better XD :iconyayamericaplz: :iconyaygermanyplz:
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femgermanylover Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Herr stick I know what you are.
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Alice-cry11 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
twilight can go and f***k it self right now there are a lot of reason on why i hate tqilight and one of them and ita my pet pev is that VAMPIRES DO NOT SPARKLE I WILL F**KING KILL YU TWILIGHT LOVERS WHO MADE VAMPIRES LOVE WEEK AND SH*T and one good thing i there is that the wolfs are full wolfs and hot not like edwaer hes gay sorry girls >~> Im done complaning so i like to say AWESOME ENDING TO AN AWESOME STORY
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Pursilla Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Go eat a bottle of glitter glue Edward, then you'll sparkle inside and out! :D Sorry I just cant stand Twilight.
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Nayuki-Toyoshi Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I read this just because I hoped it would Twilight bash. After I started reading it, I just loved the story. Loved it, then loved it even more when it did actually Twilight bash. 
:icontwilightsucksplz: (I liked the books, but the movies can go die. *read the books before they got popular and thinks twilight fanatics are just lunatics* They freaking sparkle. THAT IS JUST NOT RIGHT) 
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Shadowfollowed Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
me and my best friend used to adore twilight until we realized how stupid it was. Now we watch the movies just to make fun of them. I only read Twilight because I had no clue what it was, and i thought the books were ok, the movies sucked big time. Now, I hate twilight with a passion. Real vampires turn to ash, anime vampires get severe sunburns, and retarded vampires sparkle. XD
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Nayuki-Toyoshi Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved it before it became the next big thing, then started slowly to hate it. If they didn't FREAKING SPARKLE, then it would be awesome (:iconawesomeprussiaplz: though not as awesome as Prussia *shot* :iconimdeadplz: :iconnotreallyplz:), well way better then it is now. After the second book, I just wanted more wolfy goodness in all truth so that's the major reason I kept reading. :icononioncheerplz: 
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PokemonTrainerFer Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
HAHAHAHQHAHQHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ENDING SO TRUE HAHAHAHAHAHQHHAHAHA
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stayonstraintrack Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahaha. Reader and al really do x3
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hetafan123 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
DAT ENDING :icondatassplz:

Beautiful~!
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Lovergirlnice Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013   Artist
oh I agree twilight ruined my life!especially breaking dawn part 2
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PoisonTransformer Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Artist
my reaction to the ending : :iconclapplz:
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LadyCaitlin0429 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmeplz::Even MEIKO eating Kagamine Len, Kagamine Rin, and KAITO before eating herself is a better love story than Twilight!!!! :iconconchitaplz:: This is true!
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Shadowfollowed Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
Vocaloid! I officially dub you awesomer than prussia!~
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LadyCaitlin0429 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAYZ!!!! :iconletmehugyouplz:
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Shadowfollowed Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
:iconsupertighthugplz:
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LadyCaitlin0429 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HUGS ARE AWESOME!!!!!!! :3
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FrostLover1204 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
EVERYTHING IS A BETTER LOVE STORY THAN TWILIGHT! Hell even KIM KARDASHIANS's Month long marriage was a better love story than Twilight. THE HATFIELDS AND MCCOYS ARE A BETTER LOVE STORY. 
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MosdrasTheLight Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yes...yes we are a better love story then twilight...also sorry for crisping you Arthur....
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SonicRideMaximum Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love itttttt aru~!
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Animelover13456 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
I just love the extended ending
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HaeleeH Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
Haha! I agree with you for the hate of Twilight, your doing a good job. And I can't wait for the Merman Romano x Reader, I can be patient. Anyway keep up the good work! Hug 
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WiraLin Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
Oh, God. Twilight, really, reader? *facepalm*
cute story, btw xD
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Shadowfollowed Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
I hate twilight. end of story.
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